Sunday, March 6, 2011
Stylistic Differences
The style that Emma was written was incredibly straightforward. Physical descriptions of the characters were given to the reader the first time a character was introduced, describing as much as was necessary to envision the character. The novel opens with, “Emma Woodhouse, handsome, clever, and rich, with…” telling the reader exactly what they need to know. Character’s personalities are described similarly, often shortly within describing their physical attributes. Emma’s cleverness, her most distinguishing personality trait, is given in the opening sentence. This direct style lays out every thing the reader needs to know about the characters and leaves very little to the imagination. Compare this to Mrs. Dalloway, where very little information regarding the character’s attributes is given up front, if at all. When the information is given to the reader, it is given a small piece at a time, forcing the reader to gradually draw conclusions about the characters. Rather than define the characters immediately, Woolf allows the reader to draw their own conclusions about the characters as more and more information is given. This difference in styles is huge and also contributes to the way the novels are read and what can be expected from them.
Much like the direct writing style Emma was written with, reading it is straightforward as well. The novel goes through events chronologically and also describes the significance of the events. When attending a trip to Box Hill, Emma accidentally offends one of her friends. Mr. Knightley, a prominent figure, scolds Emma for doing so and tells her the extent of her offense. Once again, this leaves very little up to the reader to discern for themselves. Furthermore, this directness leads the novel into predictable paths. After Mr. Knightley scolds Emma, he tells her to try to apologize for her comment. Because the reader knows Emma respects Mr. Knightley, she will take his advice. A few pages later, her apology is happening in the novel, just as expected. Mrs. Dalloway, on the other hand, has a far more complex story line. The novel often shifts perspectives, where neighboring paragraphs have a different point of view. This results in forcing the reader to keep track of a multitude of characters and perspectives. Also due to this shift in perspective, the reader has less of an idea of what to expect. Nearly anything, within reason, could happen next in the novel. Not knowing who was going to be the next focus, and sometimes having multiple views of the same situation, led to a much more complex and intellectually stimulating read.
The directness of Emma makes it a simple, yet enjoyable read. Mrs. Dalloway was far more difficult, but forced the reader to think more. While both are enjoyable, it comes down to whether or not you enjoy the style.
Eric Carl
Conventions in Emma and Mrs. Dalloway
in social matters or a rule of conduct or behavior.” In Jane Austen’s Emma and Virginia
Woolf’s Mrs. Dalloway, conventions have numerous uses. Conventions suppressed
personal desires, allowed people to communicate without conflict, kept lives running
smoothly, and governed social affairs.
Conventions suppressed personal feelings. As Clarissa Dalloway greeted the people
who came to her party at her own personal space, she said “how delightful to see you!”
(Woolf 163) to each person. Clarissa didn’t articulate how she actually felt about each
person who came to her party; however, she was “effusive” and “insincere” (Woolf 163)
just to conform to the conventions of the era. Clarissa Dalloway utilized conventions and
suppressed her own feelings simply to keep her guests comfortable at her party.
Conventions kept life running smoothly. Although Clarissa Dalloway, in Mrs. Dalloway,
was in love with Peter Walsh as a young adult, she married Richard Dalloway just
to conform to the conventions and expectations of her peers. Clarissa Dalloway was
expected to marry a person similar to Richard Dalloway, and she couldn’t fulfill her
relationship with Peter Walsh because of conventions. Conventions caused Clarissa
Dalloway to chose social status over love, and those conventions virtually changed her
entire life.
Conventions governed social affairs in the 1800’s and in the 1900’s. In Emma, Emma
Woodhouse threw a party for Mr. Elton’s new wife. The party continued according to
the social conventions of the 1800’s; the party began with a dinner, and concluded with
the men and women parting to separate rooms. Since social conventions were followed
almost to a tee, the party ran smoothly. Additionally, in Mrs. Dalloway, Clarissa’s party
began with the “ladies… going up one by one.” (Woolf 161) Since the party started off
following the social conventions of the time, conflicts were avoided at the beginning of
the gathering. The people who lived in both these generations relied on conventions to
have successful parties.
Conventions were so important in the 19th and 20th centuries because when a person
disregarded conventions and expressed their real feelings, conflicts were created. In
Emma, Emma Woodhouse breached conventions and expressed how she really felt
toward Miss. Bates, saying “Ah! ma’am, but there may be a difficulty. Pardon me, but
you will be limited as to number—only three at once.” (Austen 301) Emma insulted
Miss Bates, and disrupted the informal social gathering she was participating in. This
passage in Emma illustrated how important conventions were to the people in this
time period. Likewise, when conventions were disregarded, conflict between people
occurred. There were certain safe topics that people could talk about in conversations.
At Clarissa Dalloway’s party, the majority of her guests adhered to the conventions,
except for two men who quarreled. These two men didn’t use the conventions, and it
lead to a conflict at the party. The proper use of conventions generally kept conflicts
away.
The character’s actions in Emma and Mrs. Dalloway demonstrated how necessary
conventions were in the time periods the novels were set in. Without the conventions,
conflicts occurred; however, when characters used the conventions, life ran in a way
that the characters were accustomed to and expected.
Andrew Corbitt
Austen, Jane. Emma. New York: Penguin. 1815. Woolf, Virginia.
Woolf, Virginia. Mrs. Dalloway. Orlando: Harcourt, Inc. 1925.
Merriam-Webster Dictionary. Web.
Conventions dealing with Space in Emma and Mrs. Dalloway
Sunday, February 27, 2011
Online Learning
The advantages that online communication provide are quite extensive. Being able to still have English class even though the professor was not at the school is one of those advantages. It should be noted that this class period was held in a chat room, so it was a large group instant messaging, rather than a video conference. Instead of losing the class period, it allowed us to go over some housekeeping things. While this was not necessarily the best use of that time, the discussion we had in class was necessary and made it so that time was not wasted entirely. One incredibly useful aspect of the online class was that we were able to break into small groups much more effectively. Rather than being given a portion of the room, each group was given an entire “room” that only they were in. This was much more effective than a divided room for the simple fact that there were no people to distract us. However, the online class room was no substitute for the real thing.
While the online class did allow us to make use of an otherwise useless time period, it still had a fair share of problems. Typing to chat is not nearly as fast or efficient as speaking, and tone is far more difficult to interpret. Furthermore, I did not feel as attentive in the online class as a real classroom. While this could be for any number of reasons, the most likely one is that it was not done via video. The reason why I feel this way is because I didn’t have an image to accompany the text. In other words, even though we were being “talked” to, it was not nearly as effective as having a person to talk to because many of the things that accompany speech, such as tone or facial expressions, are unable to be expressed without video. While this was not very problematic for the class I was in, it did make the class period boring.
All in all, an online classroom experience seems to have a lot of potential. It would allow people to participate from nearly anywhere while having basically the same experience. Unfortunately, for many online learning programs, that potential has not been fully realized. Making the experience textual rather than verbal prevents it from being as fluid as a normal class room, and even then it may still not be perfect. Working out these kinks would allow for a classroom experience, without the classroom.
Eric Carl
Mrs. Dalloway: Cubism in Words
When one observes a Picasso cubism painting, such as Les Demoiselles d'Avignon, the feeling that his art first evokes may be confusion. However after careful observation and study, one is only filled with awe and amazement at how Picasso could have drawn something so unique! These same feelings are observed after reading Mrs. Dalloway. Woolf’s novel expertly executes a perfect translation of Cubism from the canvas to the page. Cubism was a literary movement that gained popularity before the First World War and continued in popularity until the early 1920s. The Cubist cultural movement focused on depicting objects from more than one viewpoint, as seen in Picasso’s paintings. In the painting, Les Demoiselles d'Avignon, you can see how Picasso has depicted each woman a little differently, as if he has drawn parts of them from different angels and in different lightings.
-Katherina Delgado
Woolf, Virginia. Mrs. Dalloway. 1925. Harcourt Inc. Print
Wikipedia. Cubism. 2011. Wikipedia. Web. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cubism.
Perception in Mrs. Dalloway
Sunday, February 20, 2011
Uniqueness of Mrs. Dalloway
The style of the novel explores the various thoughts and ideas that the individual characters have. What makes reading this style so difficult is that the character’s thoughts often flash back to an episode in their past, while the story continues in the present. This leads to a muddying of the “current” events since the novel flows so freely between memories and the present. Given the plot of the novel so far, the confusion that this creates actually makes the novel more interesting to read. The novel maintains an air of mystery and tension that a straight forward writing lacks. This tension, rather than being resolved quickly by the narrator, is allowed to incubate in the characters. Furthermore, the novel presents multiple viewpoints of the same situation. It will switch between views of the different characters in the same situation, furthering this tension by allowing the reader to see all angles and why the tension exists. An approach that had a more static narrator would not present this tension as effectively because it would only present a portion of the tension rather than the whole situation. Not only does this approach and style bring more in the way of tension, it also allows for more interpretation.
Due to presenting multiple viewpoints, the novel does not obviously side with any character in particular. This leaves the majority of the decision making concerning character’s actions and personalities up to the reader. While the novel certainly leads the reader to believe in qualities of characters, it does not pass judgment on characters and allows the reader to make the final judgment. Since different people will react to the same situation differently, this means that there is no definite or static interpretation to the events that transpire. These differing interpretations allow for different people to enjoy the novel, as it does not present only one perspective. This allows more people to see it in a favorable light and not quickly dismiss it because the plot is not to their liking.
The greatest advantage of Mrs. Dalloway is that it presents the reader with a variety of viewpoints and allows the reader to interpret the story in many different ways. The novel is the events of one day, and a more or less regular one at that. However, with its strengths, it creates tension and drives the plot forward, while leaving interpretation of all but the facts open to the reader. This allows what would otherwise be a bland plot with straightforward writing to be an interesting, albeit difficult, read to the average person.
Eric Carl
Time in Emma and Mrs. Dalloway
Time in Emma is linear and chronological, while the representation of time in Mrs. Dalloway is distorted, and is expanded and contracted throughout the novel. In Emma, time only travels forward. The audience experiences the character’s actions and thoughts in the present. Characters do not reminisce or relive past experiences. Since time is represented in such a chronological way, it allows the reader to have a firm grasp on what literally happened. In a way dissimilar from the way Austen represented time in Emma, Woolf manipulated the structure of time in Mrs. Dalloway. Unlike Austen, Woolf used flashbacks to reveal details about the characters in Mrs. Dalloway. Such flashbacks allowed the reader to learn about Clarissa Dalloway’s past interactions and friendship with Peter Walsh. The use of non-chronological time in Mrs. Dalloway gives the reader insight into the character’s feelings that readers do not have the ability to experience in Emma. Different representations of time in the two novels offer the reader very different experiences.
In Emma, time is mostly identified by private events, and in Mrs. Dalloway, time is mostly marked by public events. The passing of time in Emma is measured by social events, and encounters with other people. Hardly ever do the characters in Emma refer to an actual time, or make a reference to a timepiece. Readers are rarely aware of the actual time of day and are more focused on the sequence of interactions between the characters. In Mrs. Dalloway, the reader is frequently aware of time of day by the chimes of the clock tower Big Ben. Throughout the novel, Clarissa Dalloway mentioned hearing the bell, and this gives readers a sense of time. This sense of public, segmented time gives the reader a standard perspective in comparison to the rest of the novel. The fact that Emma is focused on private time corresponds with the feelings of the time it is set in, and Mrs. Dalloway centered around public time correlates with the era and the setting of the novel.
Even though time in Emma is one-directional and more natural, I feel as though I experience time in a way more similar to how it is represented in Mrs. Dalloway. The public time in Mrs. Dalloway, as shown by the chiming of Big Ben, is similar to the public time I experience at Georgia Tech. There is a whistle that sounds five minutes before the hour, and this allows me to be aware of the passage of time. Similar to Clarissa Dalloway, I reminisce over past experiences and those thoughts often affect my actions in the present. The depiction of time in novels and in real life can and does affect a person’s experience of the novel and of one’s life.
What impact does a point of view have?
Sunday, February 13, 2011
A New Breed of Writer
Virginia Woolf was once criticized for not being an excellent writer because her writing did not follow the style that had the previous generations, such as Jane Austen, had. The argument against her had character as the defining aspect of a novel. However, the technique with which character is brought about is merely different in the two generations. The older generation focuses more on character development through the plot, whereas the newer generation (with writers such as Virginia Woolf or Katherine Mansfield) develops characters by slowly giving details.
The style used by the older generation was very straightforward- the novel followed a linear and chronological progression, and characters were well defined. In Emma, Jane Austen defines every character the first time they are met in the novel. The very first sentence of the novel marks Emma Woodhouse as “handsome, clever, and rich”. While this leaves some interpretation open to the reader, the following paragraphs provide even more details concerning Emma’s nature and character. This leaves less to the imagination of the reader as the characters are extremely well defined. As the novel progresses, some of these facts become muddied or changed. However, these changes are brought about by plot development. Furthermore, these changes are also defined by the author. Jane Austen tells us directly when Emma has had a change of heart or re-examines her traits. This style requires the story to be compelling, as opposed to merely the character development.
The newer generation of writers, characterized by Virginia Woolf, follow a completely different method of defining characters. Where the older novelists would define a character, this newer group leaves much open to the reader. However, as the novel continues, they slowly add details, as well as conflict, to give the reader a complete view of the characters. For instance, in Miss Brill, the only information Katherine Masfield gives to us about Miss Brill is that she is a woman who enjoys spending time in the park. As the story continues, we are given insight into her thoughts which allow us to have a more coherent view of her. One notable fact would be her age. However, this is not revealed until the final few paragraphs of the story. The story is still reliant on character development, it just does it by incrementally giving us details rather than through the plot. A side effect of this is that the story does not necessarily follow a linear and chronological plot. For instance, in Mrs. Dalloway by Virginia Woolf, we are first given the perspective of Mrs. Dalloway. However, we are given some insight into how other characters view the world as well. This gives us more perspective than from just the main character of the novel, vastly different from the writing style of Jane Austen. However, it does also complicate the story somewhat by forcing the reader to maintain a good grasp on the current situation.
The differences in the two styles are more than just mechanical. While they have the same goals- show character develop and create an interesting or engaging story- they go about them in different ways. The older style of writing focuses on the development of character through plot, whereas the newer generation focused on character development for character development.
Eric Carl
Feudalism and Capitalism
In Jane Austen’s Emma, social classes were defined by feudalism, which was a economic land based system. Emma was a member of the leisure class which was fortunate for her because a person’s class status was determined only by birth, and there was little class mobility. Compared to Emma Woodhouse, Robert Martin was on the other end of the class ladder. He was a farmer, part of the working class and was not likely to move up in the social class. The law of primogeniture, which drove feudalism was shown by Mr. Knightly eventually passing his estate down to Henry. While Henry is not Mr. Knighty's son, he was next in line in the Knightly family. The children after Henry would inherit nothing but the family name and would become lawyers, members of the clergy, or military men
In Virginia Woolf’s Mrs. Dalloway, social classes were defined by capitalism, which was very different from social classes in Emma Woodhouses’s time period. Mrs. Dalloway was part of the leisure class, show by the fact that she lived in Westminster which was historically occupied by the nobility and the wealthy. Since Emma Woodhouse's time period, there was a movement towards capitalism. London became a center for business and trade. Lower class citizens were then more able to earn money and move up in social class. Successful tradesmen were able to challenge the leisure class in terms of wealth. This lead the laws of class hierarchy to break down and become less concrete.
After reading novels from both class structures examples, I would much rather have lived in the time of Clarissa Dalloway. Feudalism was not a fair system. Being the second born son in my family, by the law of primogeniture, I would have practically had to start over. Because of the law, I would have the choice of being in the clergy, in the military, or a lawyer. Despite still living in leisure, I find the limited opportunity unappealing. There would not be as much opportunity for my family because I would not own land and all my children would have is the family name.
Emma and Mrs. Dalloway displayed how class systems affected society. The differences between the lives of Emma Woodhouse and Robert Martin are an example of the gap between the leisure and working classes. In Mrs. Dalloway, Clarissa lived in a time in which the gap between these two gaps lessened as capitalism took control. I find the movement made towards capitalism to be more rewarding and beneficial to myself and my endeavors.
Andrew Corbitt
Emma v.s. Mrs. Dalloway
Austen, Jane. Emma. 2008. Signet Classics. Print
Woolf, Virginia. Mrs. Dalloway. 1925. Harcourt Inc. Print.
Sunday, February 6, 2011
Preconceived Ideas
To help explain my viewpoint, some background information from the novel is necessary. Prior to meeting Frank Churchill, the only info the characters had about him was from letters he mailed to his father. This means that they probably had a positive view of this man’s traits (who portrays themselves negatively?). There is absolutely nothing wrong with this. After he arrives, he is well received by the characters, and his actions and attitudes support the way he was perceived. However, he then spends an entire day getting his hair cut. Mr. Knightley sees this action as frivolous and unsupportive of Frank’s supposed character. This is where the problem can be seen in preconceived notions. The other characters, Emma included, dismiss Mr. Knightley’s view because he dislikes Frank Churchill. Even though Mr. Knightley does dislike him, he brings valid arguments up and he is easily dismissed. These attitudes displayed by the characters apply to people today as well.
People are prone to believe their preconceived ideas even when being argued against. Yet it is important to always think about opposing arguments. In Emma, if the characters had merely said that Frank Churchill still has some poor qualities rather than see him as nearly perfect, they would not be surprised when he decided to go get his hair cut. While this in no way excuses his poor behavior, it shows that the characters have a better understanding of the people around them. This thought process can be applied to ideas as well.
One major idea that people deemed as the greatest invention was the car after it was readily affordable. Not only did it provide cheap, personal transportation, but it helped clear up a significant amount of pollution in cities due to horses. However, not until recently did people start noticing that cars actually have some major drawbacks, pollution ironically being one of those. While we are now making a self conscious effort to reduce the pollution caused by cars, it’s important to note that people initially thought cars were great and could see very little wrong with them. This was obviously not the case, but people at the time may not have been properly able to identify this type of pollution.
The problems that arise from preconceived ideas don’t lie in the actual preconceptions. Even if it is wrong, that does not make it an issue. The true issue arises when people refuse to admit that their ideas might possibly wrong, whether partially or entirely. To say that people should never from ideas before given facts is an idea that will not be followed. Rather, the idea is for us not to stop questioning something until we know the whole truth about it.
Eric Carl
Who keeps you up at night?
Saturday, February 5, 2011
Styles of Characterization
Sunday, January 30, 2011
Rural to Urban
In Jane Austen's novel, Emma's life was centered about a few mile radius around her house. Her day-to-day acquaintances all live within walking distance, or a distance that can be traveled by horse and carriage . Social events in this time included visits to close friends and dinner parties, both of which are found in Emma. Not only was Emma's social life centered around her house, her education took place in her house too. Emma's instruction consisted not of formal schooling, but instead, a close friend taught her in the comfort of her home. This sort of lifestyle was common in that time period due to technological constraints. Without the convenience of cars or local trains, traveling large distances was not only difficult but nearly impossible for a large portion of the population.
Since the 19th century, technology has contributed to the shift from a rural to an urban lifestyle. Improved transportation, quicker and easier communication, and the spread of knowledge has facilitated the growth of cities across the world. An urban lifestyle is desired in the 21st century because of the availability of a variety of professions, the resources located in a city, and amount of people that live in a city. After I graduate from college, I hope that I will live and work either in or near a city. It seems as though Emma simply desires to live in the countryside forever, and that could not be further away from my goals in life. Technology has changed the aspirations of many in the past two centuries.
In the 200 years that have passed since Emma Woodhouses's time, education has changed significantly. Instead of being educated at home, the majority of people leave their houses to become educated. In the 21st century, from the time a person is about five years old, he leaves his house to attend a place of education. Yes, there still are children who are homeschooled, but the majority of children are educated in public and private schools across the country. I am proof of this shift from rural to urban movement. My parents live in a suburb of Atlanta, and after I completed high school, I left my semi-urban lifestyle to be educated at a major university in one of the largest cities in America. Unlike Emma, whose life is almost completely centered around a rural reality, my life is centered around an urban reality.
I can't fathom spending the majority of my life within in a two mile radius. I enjoy the freedom of having the opportunity of being able to travel virtually anywhere in the world. I am thankful for the technological advancements that have allowed me to do so, and I enjoy my urban lifestyle.
Andrew Corbitt